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Dollhouse drabble - Just Because
meanderings of a deranged mind
sabaceanbabe
sabaceanbabe
Dollhouse drabble
Title: Ghosts
Author: sabaceanbabe
Pairing/Characters: Echo
Rating: pg-13
Warnings: none
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: not mine, no money, no abuse intended, please don't sue
Word Count: 100
Author's note: Dude. I had to. Today's the day. :D And there was a challenge at dollhousefics.

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… eyes bore into hers like twin drills as she raises a Glock 9mm…

… weight of the little girl’s laughter as she swings her up, her own laughter bubbling up inside, desperate to escape…

… a snowflake melting on her tongue…

… pure adrenaline rush as she free-falls through the sky…

… his body moving over hers, the satin sheets on which she lies as warm as his skin…

… flash of pain spiking through her head, tearing at her very being…


Echo opens her eyes and smiles warmly at the man standing over her. “Did I fall asleep?”

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Current Mood: bouncy bouncy

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Comments
grammarwoman From: grammarwoman Date: February 13th, 2009 05:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
DUUUUUUUUUUDE! I am trying so hard to quell my excitement for fear that my curse will leap into action and kill the show before it even airs.

And the One Night Stands come out tomorrow! EEEEE!
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'll, erm, take that as approval of this drabble? ;)
grammarwoman From: grammarwoman Date: February 18th, 2009 10:56 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yes! Sorry! *sheepish grin*
spooky_xphile From: spooky_xphile Date: February 13th, 2009 05:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
Nice! And yes today is the day!
I like how you put different experiences Echo could/will have.
It's simple but still quite beautiful at the same time.
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you so much. :D
mamaboolj From: mamaboolj Date: February 13th, 2009 05:30 pm (UTC) (Link)
OMG! Just to add to the excitement of the day! You're writing fic for a show that hasn't aired. Cool and fun and very good.
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks, man. Hee!
tracyj23 From: tracyj23 Date: February 13th, 2009 05:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh, that gave me shivers!
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
Shivers are good. Yay! :D

And thanks.
rebelliousrose From: rebelliousrose Date: February 13th, 2009 05:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
Trust you to be brilliant.
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heh.
milly From: milly Date: February 13th, 2009 06:46 pm (UTC) (Link)
That was brilliant!
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! *squish*
From: dana_serenity Date: February 13th, 2009 08:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
WHIII Dollhouse fiiiic! I seriously love this!
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you so much! :D

(I love your icon, by the way.)
chamalla From: chamalla Date: February 14th, 2009 09:37 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, this is going to be good...I can feel it!
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hee! We'll see. The first ep wasn't bad. :D
emmademarais From: emmademarais Date: February 16th, 2009 11:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, very nice!

I like the idea of being in the head of an active during the wipe, showing us chaos falling away to nothingness.

/shudders/

Kind of creepy, but Joss does that well.

Nicely done!
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:25 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :D
force_oblique From: force_oblique Date: February 17th, 2009 05:20 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh wow this is so perfect!!
Your description is stunning!
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:26 pm (UTC) (Link)
Wow. Thank you so much! *blush*
xfirefly9x From: xfirefly9x Date: February 18th, 2009 09:13 am (UTC) (Link)
Oooooh! Love it! ♥
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:26 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yay! Thank you! :D
dingoaction From: dingoaction Date: February 18th, 2009 01:14 pm (UTC) (Link)
Dude, you're fantastic! I just finished watching this week's BSG, and I was left going "...friday is so far away! i must read!" and then, there was this, and it was awesome! and creepy, but, you know, in a good way.
sabaceanbabe From: sabaceanbabe Date: February 18th, 2009 09:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hee! Thanks, man. Now you make me sorry it's just a tiny little thing. :P
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